I just changed the way I want to write in the first chapter. I also changed a few words but I hope that’s fine. And also when I’m gonna change the others, I’m maybe gonna add stuff I see I have forgot to write. For example when Sara and Simon got friends again, and the choir singing in the church. And also I kinda wanna write about Valentine’s Day so I’m maybe gonna add a chapter between some of the others. Let me know what you think