Calithea_

Hello there, I was wondering if you could check out my story which is sorta cross between the fantasy and teen fiction. I would love to hear your views on it. And I really hope you would like it. 
          
          Story's Title : Engraved In Fate
          
          Link : https://my.w.tt/O2qOHJzvC8
          
          Thank you for giving your time! :) ❤️

Calithea_

@Calithea_ Aww thank you! That means a lot. ❤️
            
            I will definitely take it into consideration and improve it. Thank you for the suggestion :)
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mangosheyk

@Calithea_ Hello. I'm sorry for replying too late.
            
            First of, I love your choice of the names for your protagonists. Maximus and Kaia emmit this assertive yet mysterious vibe on them. As well as intelligence. 
            
            Your story flow is also quite interesting albeit not too cliché. It is immersive and a tad unpredictable. 
            
            I guess the only changes that you'd have to do are the punctations on the sentences when a character is speaking. Minor punctations like  periods, commas, question marks,and especially exclamation marks really cement a well published book.
            
            Good luck and I hope you all the best.
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