Min Suga2525

@starrybias Gurll omg i actually have so many Jake pics i wanna show u so baddd

@manimurariki_ That's awesome! I am glad it ended up coming together and you were able to see them.

@manimurariki_ you're so lucky

@starrybias ahhh that makes sense 

@manimurariki_ Going through her stories, I don't think it was originally posted all at once. I think she might have went back and edited and reposted it or updated it. Because she has a starting and ending date of 2 years prior. And the one that came before that is similar. And some of the comments date before the original post.

@manimurariki_ 
            
            It's definitely not easy, and I’m not sure if the way I see things will help you get any clearer... but here’s my take, for what it’s worth.
            
            Whenever I try to write too fast⏤just to keep readers engaged⏤it almost always backfires. The result ends up feeling rushed, and when I go back and reread those chapters before continuing the story, I can usually tell. It just feels off, like something’s missing.
            
            Over time, I’ve learned to write only when the inspiration is really there.
            
            Which means:
            ◦ Sometimes readers have to wait quite a while between updates.
            ◦ And other times, the inspiration hits so hard that I’ll post 3 or 4 chapters at once⏤or even multiple chapters across different stories in the same burst.
            
            Let’s not forget: this is not something you’re getting paid to do.
            So honestly, I’d say wait until the desire to write comes back naturally⏤it always does, eventually.
            Pushing it tends to lead to frustration.
            
            I hope that helped a little, at least.
            Take care of yourself!✨

@manimurariki_ It’s not just the blank page that writers fear⏤a brutal lack of motivation can be just as daunting...
            The plot of your story is genuinely captivating, and I really enjoy the direction you’ve taken in the opening chapters.
            Maybe a break will help reignite that spark, and when it does, you might return with an even more gripping continuation...?

Ohhh I totally get you I have the same feeling rn! You’re not alone and risen your time!

@manimurariki_ Ohh naurr

@TheJaylineEffect I will try my best to keep it closest to the same cuz i lowkey cringe at some parts of it so I’ll just change those parts :,) (T▽T)

@manimurariki_ Seems like it's a sign you don’t need any retouches, right? :)

@TheJaylineEffect yeaa I’ll try my best to keep it the way it is it’s just some parts that were really rushed or sounds weird so yeaa I’ll just edit those parts 

@manimurariki_ 
            It's the raw essence of what gets published that truly matters, don't you think?
            Just be careful not to fall into the trap of being a "chronic rewriter-constant reviser-self-critical-perfectionist" (an ultra-explosive combo!) 
            You might end up transforming your story so much that it loses its original spark (the one that intrigued readers... including myself!)
            That said, I totally understand how you feel, as I'm always striving for the perfect phrasing, the perfect intrigue, the perfect... everything! 
            Luckily, I succeed in making a point of not touching anything once it's online!
            Wishing you beautiful writing!