@maniyonce
anybody else can relate to writing out the flow of a section more than once and not knowing which one you prefer x_x
that’s mostly my mistakes like figuring out how i want dialogue to flow or if i want the emotions to be before dialogue, go hand in hand, or dialogue before emotions. phew it’s tedious
definitely going to try and finish or atleast give a longer draft for office affairs. i could’ve jumped right back to the present but i feel like after everything transpired during christmas, it took atleast a few more weeks for them to be where they are in the present timeline.
also not trying to spoil but part of me does want to jump ahead to what i envisioned for the future of the story but i could probably just do something separate that does still relate back to that timeline
@maniyonce oh em gee! Yes! I want ya to jump ahead too because I wanna know if the three of them eventually get together. Lolll but im going to support what you choose to do either way.
okay next “expecting” update (im working on two atm) is between eden still being a baby and her being a toddler :P… i guess i need help on deciding which one to focus on more/publish? i like them both maybe the one of the toddler era more however the baby era does give more details to things regarding bey n mani and showcase some growth/new things from the last update.
they’re both going to be posted eventually either way!
updated the full chapter for expecting II.. semi long author’s note because i like starting a one person book club :P but id love to hear other perspectives or what people might think. thanks for all the interest in the idea!
i have another “expecting” update soon maybe two or three :p wow let me not get ahead of myself but i definitely have another part that im almost finished working on and i want to try to get it out tonight
@maniyonce unfortunately, I think we are too which is a shame because they are so cute! But i rather read beymani stories from people who genuinely like both women than from people who only write it because its popular. Lol
@Beymanisrockets can’t wait actually! im excited lol i feel like we’re lowkey the only two beymani authors but i love it haha
@maniyonce yesss! Im going through Beymani withdrawals. Loll. I'm working on like five different beymani ideas so you'll hopefully have one to read soon as well!
updated the expecting in full.. im hoping for no spelling mistakes or anything repeated when i read it back because i edited it in another chapter lol. also def wanted to call the title Eden
updated the expecting draft with a little more. i wasn’t expecting it to be this long lol no pun intended but the full should be finished some time later today.
okay regarding the perfect tenant. x_x
honestly the only reason i have not updated the recent chapter is because im stuck between just glossing over how brunch went or delivering how the rest of brunch actually went. typically with the story i gloss over certain things as you all have seen and i feel like that does help me get out of worrying about every detail, but the recent chapters have been more detailed (more so because that’s just how i was feeling at that moment.)
so i am going to ask would you guys honestly like to see how the end of their brunch went or are we just settling for a gloss over which was kinda the draft that i posted?
either way i might end up answering my own question but as of now im honestly focusing on the other chapters for the story until i finish that one
@maniyonce ooou! Yes! I do wanna know how Normani acts after the bathroom, but im fine with it not being as detailed.
@Beymanisrockets lol no I’m definitely including the friend I just meant their whole brunch outing
more beymani stories pleek x_x
okay but i guess ill have to deliver
@maniyonce loll I feel like it'll be a challenge and that can either be good or bad. I do have plenty of other ideas for them if I abandon this one.
@Beymanisrockets that’s so interesting lol. I definitely had an idea in mind of mani being not necessarily submissive but not dominant either. i haven’t really gave it much thought but I’d be interested in seeing how it plays out lol
@maniyonce *feel I've asked three people (you're the third). I've got one yes to younger, domme mani and one no. Loll.
what do you guys think about masculine bey? i never really write her that way but i just want to know what you guys think because of more ideas lol
@loogz_ yes that’s typically how i try to write her when it comes to power imbalance oneshots. i don’t like to overly masculine her
masculine but like in a intimidating way. Like shes a feminine woman but her formidability makes her seem “masculine”