Hello @manna005
I just want to say I found that story Interesting. I wanted did you write that story after reading Kanto Pride written by pseudoforce. I could some similarities. I kinda liked Kanto Pride because Ash was more Mature and very famous. I am kinda upset that Ash left the Anime so I read that all the time.
I wanted to say I found your version very unique and amazing. I also wanted to say this. What I found unexpected:
1. That Red is Ash's father;
2. That Blue and Leaf are Gary's parents;
3. That Ash and Gary are cousins (But in Pokémon origins there also Proffessor Oak who is Blue's Granddad)
4. That Ash now has Two Lucarios and he caught the Riolu that he helped in sinnoh
5. I also found unexpected that Diantha is Ash's older sister;
6. And Palermo is Ash Grandmother
7. Pikachu evolved to Raichu.
What I found interesting:
1. Ash got all his released Pokémon back.
2. Before Ash and Paul battle Red did a comeback
3. Delia is a famous performer/Coordinator or Champion (I forgot)
4. When Ash made a comeback all the Gym leaders, his companions family (Dawn's mom; May and Max parents and Serena mom); friends he made from Kanto to Galar watch him do it from the broadcast;
5. I liked the Harem idea for Ash (in Kanto Pride Ash is only with 4 girls which are May, Anabel, Dawn and Serena. So thank you for adding Misty, Mallow, Lana and Lillie. I really ship AshXLillie. If only you could Add Iris and Chloe that would have been grate. Ash with all the PokeGirls would have a been grate.)
6. I really liked how Red was enjoying his "sons" battle and Blue and Leaf enjoy their "nephew" battle.
My request: I hope the next chapters come soon. Please make it better than Kanto Pride. In Kanto's Ash was working for KDA and his mom was in coma. So I can't wait to this ending. I also want to see that Ash dating all the PokeGirls.
