manou_henituse

Hello guys (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧
          	Hope you're all fine 
          	I just wanted to ask you if the cover of  " secret by secret " is good or not because I hate it ╮⁠(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)⁠╭
          	Hehe and I'm bored if you have any ideas about what should I do with the next chapter don't hesitate to say ! See yaaaa

Elly0726liana

@manou_henituse I love the cover (⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠) and if u don't mind, can u make the children's reaction once they knew everything. I mean, Cale explain why he suddenly disappear and Eruhaben explain. After that they go back and Cale will ignore them except things with his aid
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manou_henituse

Hello guys (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧
          Hope you're all fine 
          I just wanted to ask you if the cover of  " secret by secret " is good or not because I hate it ╮⁠(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)⁠╭
          Hehe and I'm bored if you have any ideas about what should I do with the next chapter don't hesitate to say ! See yaaaa

Elly0726liana

@manou_henituse I love the cover (⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠) and if u don't mind, can u make the children's reaction once they knew everything. I mean, Cale explain why he suddenly disappear and Eruhaben explain. After that they go back and Cale will ignore them except things with his aid
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manou_henituse

I feel like the last chapter was bad , chapter 08 
          should I rewrite it ? 
          Honest opinion please

manou_henituse

@fore_boding_darkness @AlexCaissie9 hmmm to be honest this chapter was the longest among the others as it was more than a thousand word while the previous 7 were less than a thousand , but I'll try to do my best giving more long chapters! Writing is really hard and I'm trying to get used to it !
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fore_boding_darkness

@manou_henituse the ch was great, but I agree with this @AlexCaissie9 guy about it being very short
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AlexCaissie9

I liked it! But you should probably make the chapters a little longer. That’s just my opinion though
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