Hey um i read your story , but the ending is really disappointing .I know we have to have face reality because we can't run away from it .I think there is plot twist between Zandra & Raisha, i think you made them didt'n end up together forever because they are the same gender .I THINK Zandra still in love with Raisha , she just deny it .No hate though i think you super talented for making lgbt love story , it just my opinion .