Hi Marie :) pareho tayo ng pangalan. Haha. I wanted to help you sana okay lang. Nabasa ko yung the Players meet each other mong story. Okay naman siya :) medyo nagulo lang sa grammatical errors, then yung plot medyo cliche pero syempre idea mo naman yun, and over all okay siya :) may mga different ways lang talaga tayo how to express our thoughts.