Marin

please read my story (or at least a couple chapters) and give me any feedback to improve as a writer. Thank you 
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/Nlk7DfqUKI

please read the first couple chapters and give me feedback // new writer 
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/DxlBm9vDFH

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/VxBqCRJjzH