marisabaratta
I did it! Chapter 14 of In Your Dreams is ready! The "e" key of my keyboard may have popped off (as you can see, I put it back), but IT'S READY!
Chapter 14: https://www.wattpad.com/1545900564-in-your-dreams-chapter-14-fun-family-and-feelings/page/4
And this scene has never been stronger. At the end of this chapter is what I call the "pre-stars scene", and I think it's finally where it needed to be. But, please, your feedback is a key part of knowing if it's working that way for others too.
Thank you for reading and wishing you well!