@marleenotme hi, dear author. So glad to be one of the readers yang dapat beli your ebook. I love it. As for your first ebook, I think.. U did very well . Cuma, ada sedikit improvements you boleh buat if you don't mind on my perception. For me, it's a bit rush to end moment diorang dekat sekolah tu which you boleh panjangkan and details sikit on how they fall in love. Because I love diorang punya high-school trope yg gaduh dulu baru cinta.
But still, your story is so lovely . I suka conflict before ending tu. Looking forward to see you next karya