Hey, thank you so much for the comment! I totally agree with you. When I first started writing this, I was emotionally drained and ended up mixing a lot of my own imagination into the story.
However, none of those parts were meant to be taken that seriously. Once I realized it wasn't the right direction, I went ahead and removed them. You should give it a read—it’s definitely not about smut at all! I’ve edited almost everything, but there might still be a few parts left that I need to work on. :(