I'm currently working on Chapter 13 at the moment but I'm not really liking the way it's going. My first few chapters were much more popular but I'm noticing the number of reads per chapter is going down. I have my few people that constantly comment and vote and I really appreciate you guys! I just wish I got more feedback on the writing style. I think part of the reason I'm struggling is because I don't really know how I want Chihiro and Shikamaru's relationship to go right now, especially with all the stuff that happened in the last few chapters. If I could get feedback on that, it would be really helpful for the next update. And please, constructive criticism is always appreciated so please please please send some this way!