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hey I saw that you commented on one of my books and I was wondering if I could get anymore feed back in terms of making my writing great. if you are willing id would appreciate if you message me
masilomodjela
@Detached-- read your piece and i like it. Was a bit sceptical at first but eventually got glued as the story unfolded. Your writing is very simple and by that it makes the story believable and one can tell you not trying to be something you not. I like the small quotes at the begin of every chapter. A few grammatical errors and typos here and there but not bad that one would want to put the read away. So far i only read black i think what would make it more interesting is mature passionate content as the story unfolds you know like your deepest fantasies. Ill let you know what i think if the other ones one i get to read them
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