maybe.alive

Hii! I am a newbie author, writing her first novel. Would you please give it a glance? It's a historical fiction with childhood romance. I assure you it would be worthwhile to go through it.
          
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So I finished the prologue, for Ephemeral, and I loved it. I loved all the similes and metaphors, and you did a great job showing how he feels from 3rd person. Only recommendations so far are I would include a brief description of Ravi in the prologue and I would also write the blurb to be longer and more informative without giving away too much of the plot. I can help you write the blurb if you need me too once I finish the story.

Hey there! I read your story and I am looking forward to reading more! It's really peaked my interest! I also started writing a new story, could be so kind to read and give review If possible