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I've completely renewed the prologue and have made 7 more chapters. I've come up with the series name, the book name, plot and characters. However, it is still in development. Should I post the first chapter?

This is just a draft, but this is the start of my prologue. Please offer any tips on grammar etc so I can fix it before saying its the official version. https://www.wattpad.com/story/115956678