matildaalbany

@EmB210 sorry I'm struggling a bit... they're a bit big 

matildaalbany

awesome I really appreciate it! xx
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EmB210

@TillyBalding Alright, Iris 2 it is then! Also with some of my comments I hope I don't sound too harsh, I'm just looking at it with a really critical eye and ultimately you are the author and have every right to disregard what I say if you think what you have written is better.
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matildaalbany

Iris 2 is my second go haha yeah sounds good :)
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EmB210

Nearly 40 votes and over 700 reads? I think a congratulations is in order girl! You're doing well! xx

EmB210

@matildaalbany now that is just hog's wash if you ask me! It's all due to your talented self! xx
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matildaalbany

@EmB210 :') but so far to go still hahaha thank you Emily, success is largely due to your help haha xx
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matildaalbany

@EmB210 sorry I'm struggling a bit... they're a bit big 

matildaalbany

awesome I really appreciate it! xx
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EmB210

@TillyBalding Alright, Iris 2 it is then! Also with some of my comments I hope I don't sound too harsh, I'm just looking at it with a really critical eye and ultimately you are the author and have every right to disregard what I say if you think what you have written is better.
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matildaalbany

Iris 2 is my second go haha yeah sounds good :)
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EmB210

Tilly! I just got the email notification saying you have updated Iris! That's amazing! Perfect timing too considering I'm not doing anything all afternoon and my Grandparents are out! I can't wait to get into it again! xo

matildaalbany

I'll get onto, thank you! xx
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EmB210

@TillyBalding I would hang around either in the clubs that pertains to the genre of story or any other club that takes your interest. For more detail as to how you can/are allowed to promote your story http://www.wattpad.com/14196763#!p=1 is a good read. I can guarantee you will pick up some good tips xx
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matildaalbany

Thank you emily! any suggestions on where to 'hang around'?
            haha your comments are great and much appreciated, I'm glad you're enjoying my story haha xx
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matildaalbany

this  is so so so so so late and I'm sorry about that but thank you so much! If you're still interested, I've changed chapters three and on wards. I tried to make it a little more interesting haha but take a read and let me know what you think if you're not terribly busy :) x