matteorite07

Here's the second rewrite of chapter two everyone:
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1543543014-journey-of-the-lord-of-darkness-and-the-empress-of
          	This time I REALLY hope it's the right one. (Probably seeing as how I'm improving and becoming more organized as I go along.)

TIMEMASTER101

Hey, how about you become my fact check, if you read and see any details that seem inaccurate, comment it and called it out. Because I am not completely 100% sure, especially how character acts.
          
          That is unless i rewatch the whole anime the 3rd time or read the whole LN for the 2nd time

tkyxie

Helloooo ! 
          
          I saw that you had added my fanfiction to your reading list. Already, thank you very much! And I am really happy that my fanfiction reaches English readers. I hope you will continue to read it and that you will always like it!

matteorite07

@tkyxie  Anyway have a good day!
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matteorite07

@tkyxie  Nah, nah no biggie, c'est correct.
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matteorite07

Okay, I finally did some research on the Planescape fandom and... I think this fiction is simply not meant for a crossover of this kind... so I guess I'm going to have to REWRITE it AGAIN... (I hate myself so much for making such stupid choices...) Anyway, I will redo part of chapter 1 along with the entire chapter 2.

matteorite07

So uh, here I am back! Basically, I've decided to do a complete rewrite of my fanfiction that I'm currently working on: Journey of the lord of darkness and hell and the empress of ice. And this for several reasons, but to keep it short this time: I simply find that it is not good enough for my level of expectation. The minimum would be for it to be at least consistent, realistic, well detailed, and described with plenty of dialogue and generally well written. By the way, I have already finished rewriting the first chapter.