matteorite07

Here's the second rewrite of chapter two everyone:
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1543543014-journey-of-the-lord-of-darkness-and-the-empress-of
          	This time I REALLY hope it's the right one. (Probably seeing as how I'm improving and becoming more organized as I go along.)

matteorite07

Okay, I finally did some research on the Planescape fandom and... I think this fiction is simply not meant for a crossover of this kind... so I guess I'm going to have to REWRITE it AGAIN... (I hate myself so much for making such stupid choices...) Anyway, I will redo part of chapter 1 along with the entire chapter 2.

matteorite07

So uh, here I am back! Basically, I've decided to do a complete rewrite of my fanfiction that I'm currently working on: Journey of the lord of darkness and hell and the empress of ice. And this for several reasons, but to keep it short this time: I simply find that it is not good enough for my level of expectation. The minimum would be for it to be at least consistent, realistic, well detailed, and described with plenty of dialogue and generally well written. By the way, I have already finished rewriting the first chapter.

matteorite07

So uh, as you saw I put my story on hiatus for several problems which are: firstly I write my stories on my father's computer because my own computer is very old and not only does it bug from time to time but I also don't have access to certain sites that I use as tools for my stories and precisely because it's my father's computer I can't use it all the time when I want because sometimes he uses it himself obviously, but also sometimes the keyboard doesn't work or in other words is ''undisponible'' and I can't write unless I use a ''visual keyboard'' directly on the computer which takes a lot more time and effort. And secondly, well, I honestly think it would be better to just rewrite some chapters so that they are both better in themselves, but also that they lay better foundations for future chapters. I know that this is only a small fanfic, but I would still like it to be as well written and told as possible, both for the chapters already published and those in the future, because after all, for me it is my story, my own universe and I want it to be as well written, told and realistic as possible.
          
          So, huh, see you next time! All this shouldn't take too long normally.
          
          PS: In the meantime, I'm going to take this opportunity to make my fanfic playlists and put some of them in order.

matteorite07

Your welcome bro.
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qeusoo12323

@matteorite07 thanks to add my story og sentry
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