mattyBking12

Just saying, but your book needs a TON of revisions. the dialogue and punctuation are terrible. Plus Matty B sucks. Literally. He probably sucks dick cause he's probably gay.

love you

working on chapter two of "the closet boy". hope you guys enjoyed chapter one! give me some feedback on how im doing and anything you would want to happen, im going to need all the help i can get as this is my first fanfiction!
          thanks everyone!
          
          -mattyBking12