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Hi! I saw your ad. When you are next available, would you please critique my teen fiction work, "Abigail Fitzpatrick's Last Drink"? 
          
          Please let me know. Thank you! :)

Hi! I'm CireDiamant, an aspiring writer (it's actually my first time to write one). I saw your post and I am hoping that you can spare your time on critiquing my story "That's what she thought", a rom-com novel. Thank you so much and I hope you like it!

hey there, I saw your post on the critiquing thread and I really appreciate what you're doing. Would you mind reviewing my story 'Like Hurricanes'? It's a teen fiction written from a boy's POV and I hope you'll enjoy reading it :)

Hey, when you're free,  I'd really like for you to check out my story November Rain :)

Hello! Would you mind critiquing my story "Grey Beanie"? I found you on the critiquing thread, and let me just say, thank you SOO much for doing this from the bottom of your heart. You're officially amazing <3

I will not be able to read any stories until Saturday but I will be reading a lot and posting my notes that I took in each chapter so far I have enjoyed all of your books and you guys have been very polite to me thank you!!!

thank you to all of you that have requested my criticism  I will start from the first to last post so nobody please get upset thanks!!! im a fast reader

Hello! I was wondering if you would look at my story, Deafening Silence. It's not  published yet, and I only wrote it on Google Docs. I can send it through email though. :)

Hi, I saw your post about offering critique and wondered if you could take a look at mine? It's romance, might include a horse or two and my name is also Abby so I think it's fate! It's called 'The Fairytale Project' and the first chapter is published if you wanted to have a read before you commit. Looking forward to hearing from you!

Ok now im looking for someone to review and give advice to my book over email. If so just send me a message on here and we will exchange emails!!!!