Bedfullofroses

Hi  just wrote a new book called 'Autism' and  I'm wondering I you could check it out so  I could get your opinion , you don't have to but that would be great ! Thank you

Bedfullofroses

@Bedfullofroses thank you so much , I'll try and improve on those aspects but it really means alot ❤ thank you so much
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mawread

@Bedfullofroses So I've checked out the first chapter. I like it and interested in seeing where you take it. Feedback: I know you are going for a short here but it seems rushed. There were some grammar errors but they don't bother me however the Wattpad community can be brutal, keep that in mind. I believe you have the talent to make it a full blown book. Your character description of mom was great. This is just my opinion and I'll continue to read on. Good luck
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mawread

@Bedfullofroses Sure I'll check it out
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