Hi, I'm really interested in your story, Dead Girl Walking, and I was wondering if you wanted to check out my story, The Last Daemon, and give me some feedback. Here's the summary:
After being struck by lightning and spending a year in a coma, Kyra wakes to a world that thinks she is dead and new abilities she doesn't understand. After discovering what she is, Kyra is forced to pick a side. She must either choose to be with her own kind or stay with the humans she has started to care so much for.
https://my.w.tt/eaxRAsL65Y