mbwoc_

Not going to lie, I kinda want to give Cartoon Cat a fat kiss. 
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	I have all the shame. 

mbwoc_

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I now remember that there was a part of the story I was thinking of putting, more then one perspective, not just Yn but Cartoon Cat. But uh since I didn’t do that, on chapter one’s night, Cartoon DOG found Cartoon Cat and they talked about something, but it was about Yn and shit, but I decided not to put the other perspective. But also on chapter three, Cartoon Dog comes back but Cartoon Cat decides to stay longer, and I think it was only those times where any other character’s perspective is shown. 

Saber4645hg

When will you publish chapter 4?
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mbwoc_

I was planning on writing more then one pov, and that I left stuff out of the book
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marcosAZE44

What do you mean
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mbwoc_

So uhh I took a few hours on editing and revisiting the old chapters and oh my gosh I found so many grammar mistakes and dialogue that wasn’t necessary. So, yeah, there’s a bit of new dialogue mainly in chapter 2. I’m so glad I went and read through the chapters, now words kinda make more sense. That’s all I have new for right now besides when is the next chapter? I have no clue, all I know is that I’m going to be working on it sometime this week or next week mainly. 

marcosAZE44

Are you still working on a new chapter?
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mbwoc_

Don’t mind the “updates” on the story, I realized that I should probably fix some errors and maybe add a few words in to fill in questionable gaps in the story. Sorry for the inconvenience! Also am going to probably put some chapter covers in. “When’s chapter 4?” No clue, writer block. I do apologize for the inconvenience ! :c (Yes the story is in a bit of a hiatus, but I’m trying to get back on the chapter).