mcmontinola5

856monserrate

heyy! read for read?

856monserrate

it takes place is the shakespeare era
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mcmontinola5

@856monserrate Well, I just read it and I really like it, it's really interesting. I would to see where this is going. In terms of advice it would be spacing out the paragraphs more since it would easier to read. Also is this like an alternate universe where the renaissance and medieval times happened at the same time?
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856monserrate

could you read my latest story The Forgotten and give feed back and I will aswell withbone of your stories
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