megan_rose_writes

Hello peoples! The next chapter of The Breaking is now up and ready to be devoured. I hope you enjoy  :)
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/393387143-the-breaking

Tinaw82

Hi do check out my story veins of iron. It's a slow burn romance with fantasy and politics. I'm a new writer and would love to get your feedback!! 
          
          Do let me know if you are interested in v4v or r4r?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395969747?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Tinaw82

ellaevelyn871

Hi! 
          I just started reading your story and I really like the beginning. Dae’s character and her struggle with the village rules made me really curious about her future. The fae treaty and the idea of girls being taken every few decades is also really interesting and mysterious. I also noticed the bad feeling Dae had at the start of the day. Is that connected to the fae coming back for the Offering?

ellaevelyn871

Oh that makes the beginning feel even more important. Dae’s bad feeling really stood out to me like it was hinting that something big is about to happen. The mystery around the fae and the Offering is so interesting already. Do you think Dae will sense the fae coming before anyone else does?
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megan_rose_writes

@ellaevelyn871 yes it connected! thank you for reading!
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