megparadero

It's entitled My Enemy's Love Affair  :3

Hi. I'm currently writing a story and I would like to have some honest feedbacks.
          
          Can you please read some chaps and give your opinion? 
          
          This would really help me improve my works. 
          
          Tnx. :3

http://www.wattpad.com/22767244-our-new-year/parts 
          
          There you go :)