leiselotte

You got good taste in books— you'd make a really good critic. 
          
          Would you please review my book for me— I know you said you'd read it later but well I want to know if it is actually........ you know worth someone's time ..........
          
          It's fine if you don't want to , 
          
          Either way , 
          
          CAN WE BE FRNDS ? PLZZZZZZ ! 

meguismyname

@leiselotte hey!! im a bit busy lately so i dont rlly hv time to read but yeah ill read it when i get time
            
            AND OMG YES LETS BE FRIENDS, FOREVER  
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jwijjms

Hi! I saw you added my story to won't recommend, I was wondering if you could give me some advice to make my work better? I want to make sure everyone enjoys it <3

jwijjms

@Jilliams44 yeah sorry, I really don't like the first chapter, I definitely agree with you. I'll alter it now, it was my first ff draft and I hadn't read a lot so I'll try to make it better. Thank you for the feedback though! 
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meguismyname

@Jilliams44 ncidksjejs I'm sorry, and I made the lists for myself, so it's like "wont re read" more like- and it's mostly cuz he just fell for her- in the first chapter? and that s just cuz she looks beautiful? idk 
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