Thank YOU so much for actually taking the time to write this to me! You are a great author that knows how to keep the reader’s attention while still keeping the plot a mystery. I have read so many books that tend to drag on. Or, even worse, I have read some that become blatantly obvious after just a few pages. You are definitely not like these authors. Your story is an example of a fan fiction that is written better than most books. Don’t let people tell you other wise. You have talent! (This coming from a fan girl who has very high standards.)
