Hi !
So... I decided to try and write a story in English.
It's called The Jerk Next Door :) Please, if you're reading this, give it a try. It'll be worth it. I promise.
I already planned the entire story.
I also want to point out that my native language isn't English. It's French. I'm missing a little something to be completely bilingual and I'm trying to gain it by writing.
So if you could read my story and criticize it - not only the story line, but also the writing in general, and point out eventual mistakes I made, I'll be forever grateful.
I think that's all I have to say for the moment. :)
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mel3003
Aug 19, 2011 03:47PM
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The Jerk Next Door
Ever since a traumatizing event happened when she was a kid, Eliza was used to be left alone. At least that w...