so i finally wrote the first chapter of my cardcaptors fanfic. here's a little teaser. tell me what you think (btw i still don't know the gender or name for the main character, so any suggestions would be apprciated)
*As (main character) slowly covered (his/her) eyes from the sunlight (he/she) gave a slight yawn. Ow so it's going to be one of those mornings, they thought to themselves, guess i have to get up now. removing the covers off the bed (main character) looked at them on the floor, shrugging (he/she) picked up the covers and made their bed. i normally leave it on the floor, so why did i pick them up and do my bed exactly? shaking their head (main character) blinked at themselves in the mirror. Gosh i had a weid dream last night, there were cards and...Sakura? why is that name so familliar? shaking (his/her) head (main character) got dressed into their school uniform. running down the stairs (main character) looked at an old photo "Mother" quickly wiping a tear away (he/she) regained their composure. slamming the picture face doen they ran into the kitchen and opened the fridge. "(Main character) are you okay?" hearing their father call from in the living room (main character) replied "Yeah, why do you ask?"
"I heard a slamming sound"
"Ow! that, um...yeah i heard it too" pulling out a bottle of wine (main character) walked into the living room. looking at their father they handed him the bottle "open this for me will ya" giving a suspicious look at his (son/daughter) he then began to open the bottle. "You know you shouldn't be drinking this on a school day" sitting next to (his/her) father (main character) gave a cheeky smile. "i don't have school. it's sunday"
"then why are you in your school uniform?"
"don't know. why aren't you at work?"
"it's sunday, i don't have work"
"you normally do..." taking the bottle of wine from (his/her) father (main character) took a massive sip of it*
For the whole story tell me what you think.