Secret life is your first book I'm reading and I'll say I'm disappointed, look i know i can't write a book and all that but some books are just not worth reading, it doesn't matter how long your book is, it is for we the readers to love, secret life was too rushed, how can people who talked to each other for like a day, two days just fall for each other. I know it's meant to be fictional but this is over the board, i like the way you write and this story is actually great but getting to the part where she first talked to the guy and when she told him she has something for him was too rushed and unrealistic, please take time to develop the relationship between the male and female lead I'm hoping your other stories will be better.
P. S Don't be annoyed I've been reading a lot of stories like this on Wattpad although your's was better but i guess it just made me snap cause i don't normally make a comment.
