meleamelea

Hi again :) It's Hard-Working Girl. The other stories are still coming soon so you don't have to read them. Thanks!

@meleamelea
          Hi, thanks for following me. Wanna do a read for a read? :) You can reply in my profile if you agree.
          
          Also, I'm here to give you advice/critique I found in your Prologue, since you say to give our thoughts about what we think about it. 
          (Don't worry I won't say any mean things :) ) 
          Your Prologue chapter is good, but here's the mistake I found:
          "Don't hate me once you know the truth,Salem. I love you."
          Now, you should put a space after every coma to make it look/seem better. I'm okay with it but some people may be uncomfortable.
          
          Please don't hate me because of this :(
          
          I'm also a starter so my story isn't perfect. So feel free to critique my story. Thanks again, and Good Luck!

Thanks for the follow!! Please can you check out my book? I would really appreciate it!! :-)

If You've read the prologue to Salem and love it, comment! I'm working on chapter 1 at the moment and will publish asap ! 
          
          -xomeleaxo-

I'm from California, I'm a teenager. Writing is my absolute passion since I was a 4th grader. Id love to hear other people's opinions on my writing pieces when I finish them (: