meli2235

Could you guys look at my book Warrior Trials? I changed some things in the chapters Leaving and Mika. I added a lot more to make it fuller and I want to know if it makes sense :) also could you please tell me if there is anywhere that I should add more detail? The more specific the place the easier it will be for me to edit and maybe get it published! Thank you guys for your help :)

meli2235

Could you guys look at my book Warrior Trials? I changed some things in the chapters Leaving and Mika. I added a lot more to make it fuller and I want to know if it makes sense :) also could you please tell me if there is anywhere that I should add more detail? The more specific the place the easier it will be for me to edit and maybe get it published! Thank you guys for your help :)

Aitotsuki

it is a little late for that but thanks for following me

meli2235

@aitotsuki I am in my 20's :)
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Aitotsuki

if it is not a problem for you 
            can you tell me your age
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