mellissacarlson

Please read and tell me whether this is a book you would like to continue reading.  I have been stuck in moving forward with it because I don't know if this is good.  I know where its going, I am just figuring out how to get it there, but if this beginning doesn't work I need to revise before I decide on the next part.  I appreciate and welcome feedback.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/105797623

mellissacarlson

Please read and tell me whether this is a book you would like to continue reading.  I have been stuck in moving forward with it because I don't know if this is good.  I know where its going, I am just figuring out how to get it there, but if this beginning doesn't work I need to revise before I decide on the next part.  I appreciate and welcome feedback.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/105797623