shammiesushi

Hello! Please check out this story. Let me know if it's worth reading  I would really appreciate a feedback. Thank you ❤️
          
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melodybiosah

@shammiesushi Hello. I checked out your story, and so far it's great. The only thing for me is that when you change the pov (Point of View), have some sort of indication showing the change. That way, it'll be less jarring. As of right now, you're doing great. Keep up the good work✊✊
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