BEAUTIFUL! Okay but seriously, it felt like I was reading an extension by Suzanne Collins herself. I feel like a lot of the problems with fanfic are caused by the author straying from the personality of the character and instead filling it in with their own, or the author starting EVERY SINGLE SENTENCE with "I", which you did neither of. You kept to Katniss' POV style really well--along with portraying Peeta and Haymitch very accurately--and the writing was just incredibly smooth. Please, keep writing.