whyyyyyyyyyyy1
yep she's def dead we gotta pull a ritual
melonaur
Idksjsjjsjs
COME BACKAKAKKKA
Yoyoyoghtt
Rip
whyyyyyyyyyyy1
is she dead
silme_hat
U there?
melonaur
I post first 2 chapters (prologue and chap 1) prolly in a bit. been feeling sick for the past few days so i havent rlly written that much stuff het lawl
melonaur
lil sneak peak for the rewritten version ><
"But you built your career for many years, and now you're going to throw it away!?"
"It was the career you wanted me to build!”
delta-kris
also maybe remove the word "many", but that depends on if an adult or kid/teen is talking (if an adult is talking probably dont remove) again just a suggestion you dont have to do anything
delta-kris
@melonist_lord I'd recommend changing the line to "But you've built your career for many years, and now you're just going to throw it away!?" just a suggestion though
melonaur
one chapter down for the remake of tfss
melonaur
lol i kinda wanna rewrite the flame shooting star or whatever before I start my learning center chuchu ><
melonaur
oh my gosh brother
teardrop_tear-td
MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THE FIREY AND LEAFY BOOK PLEASE IM BEGGING THE STORY IS SO GOOD