Hai Stormy .-. I was wondering if you can read my new book "They don't know rock and roll" I need a honest opinion..And I think I can trust you since we are both Wendy Marvel fans .3. Hope you get this and get to read!
@SparkleFoxOnDaLoose heya!! Thanks for coming to me I'm happy to help :3 now your story has great potential - I'd be super interested in seeing how it turns out - if I could give you one piece if advice though, people tend to judge a story by how it looks. For instance your story doesn't have paragraph breaks and the chapters are short - lots of people will look at it and immediately dismiss it without bothering to check out the content if it isnt nicely presented with paragraph breaks ect. But apart from that excellent story!! Interested to see where it goes ≥v≤