Allessandra2510

Hello! How are you? I know I haven't written to you in a really long time. I've been busy with school. But I finally got the time to write another chapter today and I was wondering if you were still interested to edit my work. I'll totally understand if you don't or have some other stuff to do. Hope to hear from you soon. :D

Allessandra2510

I just sent over some poetry. Please have a look.
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Allessandra2510

Ohh ya, if you're up for it, there's a pdf file I'd like to send you. It's the actual TFL book and you can compare it to my story and let me know how to improve.
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Allessandra2510

Hi! How is the editing coming along? :)
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Allessandra2510

I've been wanting to show you these. I think it's really helpful to use this outline to guide the writing process. Somehow I don't think mine fits very well with this flow. What do you think? I'm hoping to be able to write with this flow and make it a total of 27 chapters too. 
          
          Please check out these links: 
          https://youtu.be/94F-3Z6CJJw
          https://youtu.be/0ryXJ18eUp8

Allessandra2510

Hey!! I haven't heard from you in a while. Are you okay?

Allessandra2510

@Allessandra2510 No problem.
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memphisdraco

@Allessandra2510 thanks for understanding and for your patience. :-)
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Allessandra2510

@Allessandra2510 I'm sorry to hear that. :( I don't mind the long wait since I know I'm getting quality editing every time.
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Allessandra2510

Hello! I know I haven't written in a really long time. But I finally managed to come up with Chapter 5 of Tuesday and I've already sent ot to you. I hope you can edit it if you're not too busy.

memphisdraco

@Allessandra2510 Omg I'm so sorry I totally forgot to let you know I did the re-edit and sent the chapters back to you.
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Allessandra2510

@Allessandra2510 I sent a revised version of Chapter 11 which is a combination of the previous Chp 11 & 12. So you can ignore the previous chapters I sent and not do anything with them. Let me know if you have received new Chp 11 and done editing.
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Allessandra2510

@Allessandra2510 I finally managed to go through everything. You're right about the military standards. I wrote it without doing any research.. was leaving it for later. Probably wasn't a good call on my side. Btw, thanks for the adjustments. I like the way you combined Chapter 11 into Chapter 10. I'm planning to make a filler chapter for the new Chapter 11 but I have no idea what to write. I can write good action but once it comes to fillers- I get stuck. Throw any ideas my way in case you have anything in mind.
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Allessandra2510

Interested to edit? Pm me.

memphisdraco

@Allessandra2510 the POV changes aren't that bad as in not that many
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memphisdraco

@Allessandra2510 lol
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Allessandra2510

@Allessandra2510 Yup, I haven't really got the time to change everything to 3rd POV. But I'll definitely do it before posting it up. I'm sure it will. :)
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