memphisdraco

I just sent over some poetry. Please have a look.

Ohh ya, if you're up for it, there's a pdf file I'd like to send you. It's the actual TFL book and you can compare it to my story and let me know how to improve.

Hi! How is the editing coming along? :)

@Allessandra2510 No problem. 

@Allessandra2510 thanks for understanding and for your patience. :-) 

@Allessandra2510 I'm sorry to hear that. :( I don't mind the long wait since I know I'm getting quality editing every time. 

@Allessandra2510 Omg I'm so sorry I totally forgot to let you know I did the re-edit and sent the chapters back to you. 

@Allessandra2510 I sent a revised version of Chapter 11 which is a combination of the previous Chp 11 & 12. So you can ignore the previous chapters I sent and not do anything with them. Let me know if you have received new Chp 11 and done editing. 

@Allessandra2510 I finally managed to go through everything. You're right about the military standards. I wrote it without doing any research.. was leaving it for later. Probably wasn't a good call on my side. Btw, thanks for the adjustments. I like the way you combined Chapter 11 into Chapter 10. I'm planning to make a filler chapter for the new Chapter 11 but I have no idea what to write. I can write good action but once it comes to fillers- I get stuck. Throw any ideas my way in case you have anything in mind. 

@Allessandra2510 I have so far and will make sure to vote and comment!

@Allessandra2510 the POV changes aren't that bad as in not that many

@Allessandra2510 lol

@Allessandra2510 Yup, I haven't really got the time to change everything to 3rd POV. But I'll definitely do it before posting it up. I'm sure it will. :)