menagerie12

What up, readers of Neko Pirate! I decided to go back through the very beginning of my story, and let me say, ugh! So cringy! But what can you expect from a story that I started 5 years ago?
          	So! I am now going through the earlier chapters to clean them up, add/delete some things, and try to make it better and more "believable," if that makes sense.
          	If it's not too much to ask, I would like a bit of feedback as to what you all think. Keep in mind, it's still a work in progress. Let me know in the comments!
          	
          	-M12 <3

menagerie12

Yes, I promise I still am. My hours at work will hopefully be changing soon so that I can get more time to write
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menagerie12

What up, readers of Neko Pirate! I decided to go back through the very beginning of my story, and let me say, ugh! So cringy! But what can you expect from a story that I started 5 years ago?
          So! I am now going through the earlier chapters to clean them up, add/delete some things, and try to make it better and more "believable," if that makes sense.
          If it's not too much to ask, I would like a bit of feedback as to what you all think. Keep in mind, it's still a work in progress. Let me know in the comments!
          
          -M12 <3

menagerie12

Yes, I promise I still am. My hours at work will hopefully be changing soon so that I can get more time to write
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Lightgail25

Hey, are you still doing you Neko story?

menagerie12

Yes I am still working on it. I just haven’t had time to write and get everything I want written down. I’ll be posting the next chapter here in a few days or so, then it’ll take a short hiatus as I make a few chapters
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menagerie12

*slams head on table* I HATE NOT HAVING INTERNET!! I HAVE SO MANY IDEAS FOR MY STORIES/NEW STORY IDEAS, BUT I CANT DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT!!
          
          My laptop is stupid without internet and I can’t do much with my phone either. Plus, I’ve heard of people having issues trying to write from their phones and I don’t want something to happen.
          
          Sigh... hopefully my fiancée and I can get internet soon... I miss writing.