What up, readers of Neko Pirate! I decided to go back through the very beginning of my story, and let me say, ugh! So cringy! But what can you expect from a story that I started 5 years ago?
So! I am now going through the earlier chapters to clean them up, add/delete some things, and try to make it better and more "believable," if that makes sense.
If it's not too much to ask, I would like a bit of feedback as to what you all think. Keep in mind, it's still a work in progress. Let me know in the comments!
-M12 <3