meroceank8921

Hey, everyone! I'm looking for advice on a problem of mine. I'm representing the case of autistic sci-fi writers offline, and I've run into a problem involving my offline story. My aim is to help autistic readers for my book, if it ever gets published into a real book, figure out the difference between AI characters and human ones through reading, preferably through certain types of punctuation in spoken and telepathic speech. I realize I may not have written a post in a long time, but I really can't figure out how to differentiate the speech of human and AI characters for autistic readers to figure out which one is which. That's why I'm asking for your help, because I don't know where else to turn to for answers. If anyone who writes sci-fi novels can help me figure this problem out, I would greatly appreciate it. I've tried posting on Facebook about this problem, but I've got more confusing and conflicting answers, which is part of the problem, not the solution. I need the solution, and I believe you guys can help me figure out the solution. Please help!

empiresofwater

@meroceank8921 I've written AI characters before (Valkyrie in my Chimera is AI but a hyper intelligent AI) and the main difference I make is to have AI a lot more formal and with a lot more 'perfect' speech, unless they have been programmed differently. AI always has to have a set of rules it conforms to and cannot deviate from (unless it's a rogue AI but that's a different story!) and so it makes sense that it would follow a lot of the written rules of grammar etc. It would be a lot more absolute, with little use of idioms and figurative language, I feel. It's always worth setting ground rules for your AI character, both within the writing and within the content, and making sure they conform to that. 
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meroceank8921

Hey, everyone! I'm looking for advice on a problem of mine. I'm representing the case of autistic sci-fi writers offline, and I've run into a problem involving my offline story. My aim is to help autistic readers for my book, if it ever gets published into a real book, figure out the difference between AI characters and human ones through reading, preferably through certain types of punctuation in spoken and telepathic speech. I realize I may not have written a post in a long time, but I really can't figure out how to differentiate the speech of human and AI characters for autistic readers to figure out which one is which. That's why I'm asking for your help, because I don't know where else to turn to for answers. If anyone who writes sci-fi novels can help me figure this problem out, I would greatly appreciate it. I've tried posting on Facebook about this problem, but I've got more confusing and conflicting answers, which is part of the problem, not the solution. I need the solution, and I believe you guys can help me figure out the solution. Please help!

empiresofwater

@meroceank8921 I've written AI characters before (Valkyrie in my Chimera is AI but a hyper intelligent AI) and the main difference I make is to have AI a lot more formal and with a lot more 'perfect' speech, unless they have been programmed differently. AI always has to have a set of rules it conforms to and cannot deviate from (unless it's a rogue AI but that's a different story!) and so it makes sense that it would follow a lot of the written rules of grammar etc. It would be a lot more absolute, with little use of idioms and figurative language, I feel. It's always worth setting ground rules for your AI character, both within the writing and within the content, and making sure they conform to that. 
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meroceank8921

Hey, everyone! So, since I couldn’t find anyone willing to help me edit, I tried to self-edit, and as of now, my word count is lower than it was when I first started self-editing. But I still need a lower word count than I have right now for my manuscript (I have no idea what the total word count for my manuscript is right now, but I’m getting to my goal of editing out some unnecessary phrases and replacing them with different phrases). It has been hard work trying to find someone who could help me with my editing, and no one was willing to help me, so I knew I had no choice but to do it myself, especially after writing it myself.

therosy65

@meroceank8921 nah it's alright, I wish you the same ❤️
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meroceank8921

@therosy65 I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I just thought you ought to know that it was a sci-fi story for YA audiences. Thanks for trying, though. I wish you well on your novels going forward.
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meroceank8921

Hello, everyone! How are you today?
          I’m looking for any editing groups who may have Microsoft Word, or at least, the version of Microsoft Word that has the Editor selection added to it. I’m in critical need of a professional editor to help me with my editing, but I can’t afford a real professional editor at this time, what with the ridiculous monetary prices they have going on for their editing services. So I have no choice but to turn to those who aspire to become editors from Wattpad itself.
          I’m looking for groups who are willing to work with OpenOffice Word as my main program and possibly convert it to Microsoft Word (if they have the latest version of the program itself) if they need to, so they can make their editing journey easier. If you know of those same groups who are willing to work with me on my offline YA dystopian novel, I would greatly appreciate all the help you can give me.

meroceank8921

Oh, to add to my request, it would be easier if I had someone from the USA who would be willing to work with me on my novel offline and have a personal email address I can send my novel to so that my terms and spelling on my novel are correct in USA terms.
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meroceank8921

Hey, everyone! I’m just waiting on feedback news from one of my beta readers at the moment, but I would love to start a blog in the meantime. I hope you guys are alright with a blog from me, since I once wrote an article for a blog post I did before Discord came along. Besides, I need to do something writing-related, since I have no feedback news as of yet from one of my beta readers, and I’ve got writer’s block regarding the second book in my series as of right now. Right now, I’m just crocheting and trying to get a blanket project made so I can try to get it sold somewhere, like at a craft fair, perhaps. I’m so focused on crocheting right now, it’s scary how fast I can make a certain project if I put my mind to it. Besides, my computer isn’t doing so hot right now. It’s on the verge of completely breaking apart from the inside unless I pull enough money together to buy a new laptop computer for myself. And believe me, those kinds of computers cost like $600-$700+ in USA Dollars alone, depending on how fancy they are in their programming and how advanced their tech seems to be. And I need a computer that doesn’t have the vents down at the very bottom or a hard plastic bubble protecting the components inside that will expand the longer your computer is running.

Olivia_Benedetti

I would love to see a blog post it on here I would love to see it :) 
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CrystalliaCallistral

Heya there! How's life been for you? I know we haven't chatted in a while so I figured I would check in and see how you were doing!

CrystalliaCallistral

@meroceank8921 Hey, it’s no problem! It’s still posted in my wattpad bio, if you wanted to hop over to my profile
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meroceank8921

@CrystalCallistral Hey, there! I recently finished my book, Neko Battler, just last week (can’t remember which day it was). However, I need some beta readers to help me out, as my book could use some cleaning-up on its plot. My last beta reader quit because they thought I was being negative in my book and attacking neurodivergent people when I was really trying to balance some elements of reality with my plot. They even called words like “masking,” “fixation,” and “obsession” negative terms, but I really don’t see how they can be negative to someone who is autistic like me. But the beta reader suffered trauma from being bullied in their youth for being different, and back in their youth, like around the ‘60s-‘70s or so, girls with neurodivergent traits weren’t diagnosed properly, so they were pretty much traumatized from the bullying, which made them view my story as negative for using terms like the ones I listed before. I just wanted someone to enjoy my story without being all negative about it, so I had to write an author’s note and a trigger warning to alert others of what they may be reading.
            My question to you is, would you be willing to become my beta reader and offer constructive feedback on what needs to be cleaned up and what doesn’t? If you are interested, would you mind sending me your email address? I hate to ask this of you, but I think I lost yours in the info mine, and I hate to ask you like this. I will be sure to delete your post with your email address if possible to protect your privacy.
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meroceank8921

Hey, everyone! I'm finally finished writing the full entirety of my novel, but I need a neutral beta reader to help me analyze my book and see what needs to be removed and what doesn't. The reason I asked is because one of my beta readers was arguing with me about negative terms I should be removing because they feel like a direct attack on autistic people. I'm not intentionally trying to attack anyone through my story, but that's exactly what my beta reader thought I was doing with the usage of what she considers to be negative terms like "masking," "fixation," and even "obsession." But all I really need is clear, concise editing feedback through notes in my story where I can see them, not to waste my time arguing with a sensitivity reader about what terms I should be using and what I shouldn't in my story. If you are willing to become a neutral beta reader who is willing to provide editing feedback, I would greatly appreciate it.
          So, my question of the day is, what are your thoughts on having neutral beta readers who won't waste your time arguing with you about what terms you should be using in your story and what you shouldn't?

meroceank8921

@FrostedForestFairy You don’t know the half of it. My former beta reader made a very big deal out of those words as being negative because she was horribly bullied for her differences as a child, and even as an adult, she still has trouble with people picking on her because she’s different from them. Back in her day, way before my time on Earth, all in Great Britain, girls like her weren’t officially diagnosed with anything, and it was the males who usually got diagnosed and shipped off to mental institutions, where they were tortured and treated horribly. But my former beta reader got triggered by those words and thought they were bad, and that I was being negative when, in reality, I wasn’t trying to attack anyone or be negative. And she told me to remove them completely and replace them with positive ones. But how can I replace them with something positive if they’re supposed to be part of my story, am I right? Yet, she made a really big deal out of them.
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FrostedForestFairy

I don’t personally think any of those words are offensive though? I've seen actual neurodivergent people use them.
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Olivia_Benedetti

@meroceank8921 thank you and that’s okay I check it out when I can yeah. I’m pretty busy today as I am trying to get chapters out with my books lol I got bad case of writers block 
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meroceank8921

Hey, everyone! I know it’s been a long time since my last announcement, but I’m so close to completing my novel, and I really need a good editor who can help me edit my novel for free, as in no monetary payments to help me edit a novel that is completely original, suspenseful at the end of each chapter, and has engaging characterization (according to a beta reader who lives in Great Britain). If I had a comp novel to compare it to, I’d say that Amy McCulloch’s Jinxed series would be the closest to it, but with a neurodivergent protagonist and is set more in the United States of America than anything. I really do need an editor who can help me smooth out the errors I may have missed and the pacing in some spots, and one who may be used to prologues being in a novel. I also need that same editor to be used to American spelling more than anything as part of normal life. I’m so close to finishing up my novel, but my beta reader said that I need a good editor. However, I can’t afford an editor who only accepts monetary payments, and that’s why I need your help, for all you editors out there. Can you help a neurodiverse author in need of an editor and with the requirements I listed above?