mervinangel

Hi, guys please show me love by interacting with my stories, corrections are allowed and constructive criticism is welcomed by me
          	I just published "Almost same story (Eric's POV)" of my story "Love Out Loud". https://www.wattpad.com/1508956152?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=mervinangel

mervinangel

Hi, guys please show me love by interacting with my stories, corrections are allowed and constructive criticism is welcomed by me
          I just published "Almost same story (Eric's POV)" of my story "Love Out Loud". https://www.wattpad.com/1508956152?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=mervinangel

mervinangel

CLmauve

echos from the past turned out to be a very satisfying and poignant work of fiction, with a good plot, well developed characters, a very interesting premise and scheme of pacing, and inventive exploration into themes of love, reincarnation, life, and the passage of time. keep up the good work :)