Jas-the-bookie

Hi , ik I'll be sounding like a lame person , but.....
          
          I was wondering....I was hoping if you could check my book 'The Diary Stealer?' 
          It's kinda unedited and my first draft (I'm lazy to edit) ...but still? I need some feedback . Also , tryna reach 3k votes.
          I see that u r a fan of /read cliches ?