Oh you're actually reading mine XD.
Thanks. It's embarrassing because mine is horrible. I'm planning on editing it a LOT when it's finished. But I just wanted to warn you because I'm already embarrassed.
Also, chapter 1-7 are pretty bad. It gets awesome and the chapters get longer and better from there.
One of the things that I know I will re-write is the fact that Chell forgives him so fast and yeah I'm gonna try to stop rushing into things.
Anyway, thanks for actually taking the time to read some of it.
~You Know Who I Am.