Hi, dear! I dah baca your story and it’s quite good actually! ( you just need a little bit improvement in your writing style ) On top of that, storyline you akan lebih menarik lagi kalau you ‘olah’ lagi dan panjangkan sikit satu chapter yang you tulis—around 1400 or more than that ( it’s up to you! ) Last but not least, don’t ever give up! Everyone has a good potential in what they’re in, including you! ❤️ Anyways, fly high okies?