metallicat3627
Hey guys, it's been a while, hasn't it? My plans are to hve two new short stories in my short story collection and I will be editing/fixing and essentially upgrading The Invisible World! happy reading!
metallicat3627
bkadiry21
OK thanks for the that I will apply it
bkadiry21
Thanks so much
metallicat3627
@bkadiry21 It's okay. With your story writing, you need to learn how to space everything properly and how to not make your sentences confusing and long. Other than that, your story is actually pretty good :)
bkadiry21
Or are you on whatsapp we could talk through there
bkadiry21
I don't know maybe you could help me spreading the word?
bkadiry21
So how will we do it
Will you post it on your page or what
metallicat3627
@bkadiry21 What would you like me to do? Edit? Help write? (Do u have a kik I could talk to you with? I check it more than this)
bkadiry21
Thanks so much
The name of the book is the four rings
bkadiry21
Hello I was recommended by Aussie chick to you
I hope it's not any trouble but my book has become really stagnant and I was wondering if you could help me out with it
If it's not any trouble though.
metallicat3627
@AussieChic2000 No problem! I vote on the things I like--they need to make a vote button for people as well
metallicat3627
I will be writing more adaptations of the Brothers Grimm stories if anyone has been reading the first one and I am hoping to make this into a series type thing, so if you guys want to request any tales done by them, please do :)