mia_rose240

Arkham Jess and Arkham Batgirl are literally Tangerine and Lemon. I just realized this. 

mia_rose240

First chapter out now! This ones gonna be a slow update because I'm still working the storyline (because I like to make my life harder than it has to be) but if you guys have any ideas, let me know!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403700041

mm_kkmm

@mia_rose240 Always happy to help with any ideas!! Super sorry and I hope I’m not overwhelming you my friend!!!
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@mia_rose240 Also I was thinking maybe bring back the dog kennels more like maybe after Diane’s death Sabrina and Ellie also sometimes Eli as well took over the dog training/breeding operation that Diane started and continued on with that legacy. Maybe, Eli ends up partnering with his moms dog delta’s grand puppies Kane and Kaya or something like that and that becomes his patrol dog/partner because every sherif needs a good police dog/patrol dog.  Kane his K9 partner and Kaya is Sabrina protection dog/companion.  Always just ideas but I do miss having the dogs in the story because I absolutely LOVED Diane’s k9 delta and the wolves omg cris my eyes out when they all died just loved them all soo much!! Anyways just ideas but hopefully you can add that to the story as well. 
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@mia_rose240 Omg my friend loved reading the first chapter  sooo much!!!!! I do have an idea for a flashback of when Sabrina gives birth to DJ maybe have Eli, Dina and Ellie and how that brings them all closer together as a family in the moment. They couldn’t get her to the clinic in enough time for some reason so they all help Sabrina bring Dj into the world, all chaotic but beautiful experience at the same time idk I could just imagine them all working together through that scene. Then finally Tommy and Maria come to the house and see them all exhausted from the ordeal but the baby was safely born anything idk just an idea for a flashback because I can totally see Dina taking control of the situation because she had a baby before, Eli trying to be the support hubby he is and Ellie just rushing around getting supplies can just imagine it now. Anyways just an idea. Maybe kinda give Eli some flashbacks of when his mom miscarried because he was with her through the whole ordeal because Joel was out on a patrol. Eli being a little scared to Sabrina because he doesn’t want to lose his baby like how his mom lost her baby. But in the end his and Sabrina baby is born safely and they come up with her name with Dina and Ellie just all of them having a beautiful moment as a family. I could also see Eli having this beautiful moment hold his daughter for the first time omg got me in happy tears thinking about it haha. Again just an idea you can take it or leave it no pressure. Anyways can’t wait to read more my friend absolutely killed the first chapter sooo good!!!!
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I put my face as my pfp for the first time in forever :,) rip to me lmao I look ugly 

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@mia_rose240 girl don’t even! You’re beautiful!!
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