@mialuxs
Hi, I hope you'll have time checking out my story.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/250774562?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=DanielaMaldita28&wp_originator=wcapWg0mGWvKRli8TiPuyY5583psJBgds8csW1kcZKoWYL4lysguA%2BuLs6%2FVsd6ZUrsLG17O6b87FImYqPhEAviGSsFwcfyj13H8z4t4b3gbPRIuzRE%2B3%2FAAxXPcGYCc
Hey everyone♥️ . I just finished editing + putting some more details in my first two chapters.
I hope y’all enjoy it✨♀️.
It's very good. But you could add a little more detail. Like what was she feeling as she sat there sitting on her bed, waiting to be taken. Or how did the house look when she walked in. Other than that it was really good.
okay thankyou♥️ I’ll make sure to re-edit part 1 and 2 and put more details because I’m sure in part 3 it’s pretty good because that’s when I actually started working on my writings. thanks for the advice ✨
I loveeeeeeee this storyyyyyyyyy good jobbbb
