CathyL0v3

no offense, but this story is really stupid. please, i beg you, stay away from the celebs. leave them for realitly. ppl want imagination when they read. not some love struck obsessed girl jawing bout how how awesome it'd be to marry a celeb who is probably to old for them anyway.
          write something else. fantasy maybe or romantic comedy.
          I'd read it, and probably like it.

xoxo_kevinjonas_xoxo

Your story is starting out great!!!!  Please continue and maybe write longer chapters.  I look forward to reading yuor next upload.  Also, i will soon be postiong a jb fanfic that i have been working on for a year now called when you look me in the eyes.  Would you mind reading it once i have posted it.  Also would you mind becoming a fan of mine?  Thanx!