micha-mouse

Ok so I unpublished In the Shadows for now because I will be focusing on my new fic, and because I really didn’t like how it was written and plan on making a lot of changes when I have time.

crazyjay1326

I’ve only had the chance to read your description for the George story so far but I just have to say… wow
          
          It’s not only beautifully written, but also a phenomenal setup for an impeccable love story! I really love the dynamic between your O.C. and George just based on that description. I mean I think it fits so well with George Weasley’s character in and out of relationships. I especially loved the repetition of the particular phrase “after all” at the end of each of their sections. It made the summary so catchy while still being concise and hinting at their dynamic since the wording change gives a glimpse into how they see each other differently than they see themselves— ahhh
          
          I absolutely adore it so far!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BESTIE! IM SO PROUD OF YOU!

micha-mouse

OMG TYSM! You’re feedback means so so much to me! And im so grateful for your feedback bc the other granger is literally one of my favourite fic on here!
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